ECOMMERCE
Rewrite the above the fold product block
Use when a product page has traffic but low add to basket rate and the top of the page is doing nothing.
pdp-above-fold-rewrite.md
Rewrite the above the fold block on this product page.
Product: {{PRODUCT_NAME}}
Current title, price, and copy: {{CURRENT_ABOVE_FOLD}}
Full specs: {{SPECS}}
Top three reasons customers say they bought it: {{PURCHASE_REASONS}}
Top three reasons customers hesitate: {{HESITATIONS}}
Price and any comparison anchor: {{PRICE_CONTEXT}}
Produce three complete alternatives, each with:
- Product title as shown on page, under 65 characters.
- One line under the title, under 15 words, stating what it is and who it is for.
- Three benefit bullets, each ending in a spec in brackets.
- One line that answers the biggest hesitation directly.
- Button label.
- The single assumption this version is betting on.
Then rank the three by how directly they address the recorded hesitations, and state what you would measure to tell them apart.
Rules:
- Every bracketed spec must come from the specs input.
- Do not use a superlative unless the spec supports it.
- Do not remove information the current version carries without saying what you removed and why.
- No em dashes.
Fill in before running
Replace each placeholder with your own detail. The more specific you are, the less the model invents.
- {{PRODUCT_NAME}}
- {{CURRENT_ABOVE_FOLD}}
- {{SPECS}}
- {{PURCHASE_REASONS}}
- {{HESITATIONS}}
- {{PRICE_CONTEXT}}
Getting a better result
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1
Hesitation data is what makes this work. Without it you get three rewrites of the same idea.
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2
The "assumption this version is betting on" line tells you what the test is actually about.
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3
Keep the bracketed specs in the live version. They are the part that survives comparison shopping.