Rewrite an about page for entity clarity
Use when your about page tells a story but states none of the facts an assistant needs.
Fill in before running
Replace each placeholder with your own detail. The more specific you are, the less the model invents.
- {{CURRENT_ABOUT_TEXT}}
- {{VERIFIED_FACTS}}
- {{POSITIONING}}
Getting a better result
- The "who we are not for" section is what stops assistants recommending you to the wrong buyer.
- Keep the facts list as text, not an image or a graphic timeline.
- Mirror the same facts in your Organization schema so the two never drift apart.
Questions about this prompt
When do I rewrite the page rather than run the consistency audit?
When your own about page is the weak source rather than a third-party profile. The consistency audit compares descriptions across the places you appear. This rewrites one page so it states the facts an assistant needs: what the organisation is, what it does, for whom, where, and since when.
What do I need in front of me?
A written list of facts you are willing to publish and can stand behind: founding date, location, size, ownership, named customers or sectors. Anything missing from {{VERIFIED_FACTS}} is omitted rather than blurred into vagueness, so a thin list produces a short page. That is the correct outcome, not a failure.
What comes back, and which section deserves the most attention?
Five sections: a factual opening of 50 to 70 words, what we do, a plain facts list, who we are and are not for, and contact routes. Labour over the not-for section. It is what stops an assistant recommending you to a buyer who churns within a month.
What is the mistake that costs me?
Reinstating the founder story in review because the page feels cold. The story is the part nothing can extract a fact from, and it pushes the facts list further down where a retrieval boundary may fall. Give the narrative its own page and mirror the facts list in your Organization schema.