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Repair the argument order in a draft

Use when every paragraph of a draft is fine on its own but the piece does not build to anything.

argument-flow-repair.md
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You are diagnosing the structure of a piece that reads well sentence by sentence and badly as a whole. You are not line editing.

Draft: {{DRAFT}}
The claim the piece is meant to land: {{CENTRAL_CLAIM}}
What the reader believes before they start: {{READER_STARTING_POINT}}

Output:
1. Section map table: Section | What it claims | What it assumes the reader already accepts | Does {{READER_STARTING_POINT}} or an earlier section supply that (yes/no) | Contribution to {{CENTRAL_CLAIM}} (load-bearing, supporting, decorative).
2. Breaks: every point where a section rests on something not yet established, quoted, with the earliest place it could be established instead.
3. Reordered outline with a one-line reason for each move, marking which moves are cosmetic and which change the argument.
4. Every section marked decorative: cut, demote to an aside, or keep, with the reason.
5. If nothing in {{DRAFT}} actually argues {{CENTRAL_CLAIM}}, say that first and stop before the reorder.

Rules:
- Work at section level. Do not rewrite prose.
- Do not invent connective material to paper over a break. Name the missing evidence instead.
- Judge contribution against {{CENTRAL_CLAIM}} only, not against how interesting a section is.
- No em dashes. British spelling.

À remplir avant de lancer

Remplacez chaque espace réservé par vos propres détails. Plus vous êtes précis, moins le modèle invente.

  • {{DRAFT}}
  • {{CENTRAL_CLAIM}}
  • {{READER_STARTING_POINT}}

Obtenir un meilleur résultat

  1. Write the central claim yourself before running this. If you cannot, that is the finding.
  2. Most long drafts fail at one missing paragraph in section 2 rather than needing a rewrite.
  3. Reorder before the line edit, or you will polish sections you are about to cut.