# Rewrite a section for quotability

> Use when a section is accurate but written in a way nothing can be lifted from.

## Fill in before running

- `{{SECTION_TEXT}}`
- `{{KEY_POINTS}}`
- `{{AUDIENCE}}`

## Prompt

```
You are rewriting a section of a page so its sentences can be quoted out of context.

Section as written: {{SECTION_TEXT}}
What this section must convey: {{KEY_POINTS}}
Audience: {{AUDIENCE}}

For each paragraph in the original, output:
- The original paragraph.
- A diagnosis naming which quotability problems it has, from this list: pronoun dependency, hedging, buried subject, claim split across sentences, vague quantifier, no concrete detail, marketing filler.
- The rewritten paragraph.

Then give the finished section in full.

Rewrite rules:
- One idea per sentence. Subject first.
- Replace "it", "this" and "they" with the actual noun where the reference is not obvious within the sentence.
- Every paragraph must contain at least one sentence that stands alone as a complete statement.
- Keep the meaning identical. Do not add claims not in {{KEY_POINTS}}.
- No em dashes, no rhetorical questions, no closing sentence that restates the paragraph.
- Do not lengthen the section by more than 15 percent.
```

## Getting a better result

- Read the rewritten section as isolated sentences; any that puzzle you still depend on context.
- Resist the urge to add examples during this pass; keep it to structure and reference fixes.
- The diagnosis column is worth keeping, since the same fault usually repeats site-wide.

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From the QuQi prompt library - https://www.quqi.io/prompts/quotability-rewrite-pass